havoc
Idun
It was always... just... Me.
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Post by havoc on Mar 8, 2016 21:33:23 GMT
Yeah, like the guy wasn't tormented enough without me writing fanfic like this. There's just so much depth to his character. Also, it feels like all stories with him would have a tragic ending. Just this type of character, I guess?
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neliete
Idun
A fangirl of Raven, The King Of Dorks
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Post by neliete on Mar 8, 2016 21:38:39 GMT
am i the only one here that seriously can't write?... or atleast the stuff i write... i think it's bad. sadly this is the only example i have animefan9545.deviantart.com/art/Unnamed-Story-430194737, and some of it is still from serval years ago... mainly the last part... though i fixed spelling in that. (being the only one in train isn't weird, you know) But, well, I'm no expert when it comes to writing but your example/story kinda lacks flow (probably because of the fact that you pretty much use one style of sentence construction); + the lack of spacing between paragraphs in internet format is terrifying so if you write something, do your best to not write it in ''one sentence per paragraph'' or ''I absolutely detest any kind of spacing!'' style. Also, don't rush to finish the story - in that example it's painfully evident that you have a nice idea in your mind but don't really know to write it all down. So don't be afraid of shoving of what the character feels, sees, and so on at the moment. But, well, I've been playing a play-by-post game for almost 7 years now (well, not in English); we have quite high writing standarts there (well, there are some actual writers there) so... you kinda pick up something when you write something on daily basis. Note: not that I'm boasting or anything.
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havoc
Idun
It was always... just... Me.
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Post by havoc on Mar 8, 2016 21:39:38 GMT
Everytime I think I found a good idea for a fanfic, after reading what I wrote, I find it so boring that I drop it halfway. So, you're not alone... nah for me it's more like "and suddely i can't continue..." seriously i couldn't get past that airial attack, and there is a whole world still waiting. and now the battle part is making me mad because it's bad (that rymed XD) then again the first version i wrote when i was 13-14. the last that part is still a left over from that. I think, the more you write the better you get at it. There's plenty of writers that started kinda poorly, but ended up with an amazing story. So,umm, keep at it? In my case I had roughly planned major events from beggining to end, so I knew what to write but... If I think its boring, others would probably think the same so I did't bother. Though I might try if I'm really bored.
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neliete
Idun
A fangirl of Raven, The King Of Dorks
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Post by neliete on Mar 8, 2016 21:41:01 GMT
Yeah, like the guy wasn't tormented enough without me writing fanfic like this. There's just so much depth to his character. Also, it feels like all stories with him would have a tragic ending. Just this type of character, I guess? Well, the guy triggered quite the massive death flag. And, to tell you the truth, pretty much the only way of getting rid of it is by making all the 150 chaps into a ''it was just a dream'' episode.
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havoc
Idun
It was always... just... Me.
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Post by havoc on Mar 8, 2016 21:44:39 GMT
There's just so much depth to his character. Also, it feels like all stories with him would have a tragic ending. Just this type of character, I guess? Well, the guy triggered quite the massive death flag. And, to tell you the truth, pretty much the only way of getting rid of it is by making all the 150 chaps into a ''it was just a dream'' episode. xD Better not to get too attached to him. "And so, Harry woke up in his cupboar under the stairs and realised that all wizardy was a dream"
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Post by ghoulchan on Mar 8, 2016 22:11:34 GMT
am i the only one here that seriously can't write?... or atleast the stuff i write... i think it's bad. sadly this is the only example i have animefan9545.deviantart.com/art/Unnamed-Story-430194737, and some of it is still from serval years ago... mainly the last part... though i fixed spelling in that. (being the only one in train isn't weird, you know) But, well, I'm no expert when it comes to writing but your example/story kinda lacks flow (probably because of the fact that you pretty much use one style of sentence construction); + the lack of spacing between paragraphs in internet format is terrifying so if you write something, do your best to not write it in ''one sentence per paragraph'' or ''I absolutely detest any kind of spacing!'' style. Also, don't rush to finish the story - in that example it's painfully evident that you have a nice idea in your mind but don't really know to write it all down. So don't be afraid of shoving of what the character feels, sees, and so on at the moment. But, well, I've been playing a play-by-post game for almost 7 years now (well, not in English); we have quite high writing standarts there (well, there are some actual writers there) so... you kinda pick up something when you write something on daily basis. Note: not that I'm boasting or anything. (i actualy don't really know shit on public transport) i see... one of the only beta readers i have had found it interesting so far, but didn't say annything else. plus i'm terrible at explaing shit whithout going full on overboard. and to be fair i have zero clue on what i'm actualy doing when writing. i really need some help with this. also my mind works in images... please keep that in mind. i have also been kinda playing a game series like that, in fact the next chapter of it is almost done.
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Post by ghoulchan on Mar 8, 2016 22:13:00 GMT
nah for me it's more like "and suddely i can't continue..." seriously i couldn't get past that airial attack, and there is a whole world still waiting. and now the battle part is making me mad because it's bad (that rymed XD) then again the first version i wrote when i was 13-14. the last that part is still a left over from that. I think, the more you write the better you get at it. There's plenty of writers that started kinda poorly, but ended up with an amazing story. So,umm, keep at it? In my case I had roughly planned major events from beggining to end, so I knew what to write but... If I think its boring, others would probably think the same so I did't bother. Though I might try if I'm really bored. i see, but thats the case whith most things. keep in mind, that when writing you as writer know everything. so it already becomes kind of boring, but for somebody else it might be different.
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Post by SS on Mar 9, 2016 0:18:18 GMT
all fanfics should have steamy scenes...
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Post by Neco on Mar 9, 2016 2:20:01 GMT
all fanfics should have steamy scenes... Yeaaahhhhh~ Heat that water up~...............cooking scenes plz
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Post by SS on Mar 9, 2016 2:24:10 GMT
all fanfics should have steamy scenes... Yeaaahhhhh~ Heat that water up~...............cooking scenes plz some almost nude tease i meant Dx gosh neco! get ur mind in the gutter!!!!
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Post by Neco on Mar 9, 2016 2:25:27 GMT
Yeaaahhhhh~ Heat that water up~...............cooking scenes plz some almost nude tease i meant Dx gosh neco! get ur mind in the gutter!!!! People who can cook are quite attractive! So....cooking delicious meals...almost nude tease...SAME LEVEL OF GOOD.
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Post by twilightamber on Mar 9, 2016 2:49:50 GMT
all fanfics should have steamy scenes... Yeaaahhhhh~ Heat that water up~...............cooking scenes plz
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Post by twilightamber on May 11, 2016 0:27:52 GMT
So I was wondering what happened in chapter 73 after Rood said to Lidusis that he needed to tell him something a couple months ago, and from the eventual conclusion sprouted this idea. Enjoy, I guess?
“Lidusis. I have something to tell you. You’re involved in it, as well as myself.”
By the time Rood was finished speaking, Lidusis’s full attention was on him. Rood had made up his mind; he wasn’t going to keep Lidusis in the dark any longer. It wouldn’t be wise to tell him everything, but Rood’s friend already suspected something was going on. It was simply a matter of partially explaining what that something was.
Rood breathed in, searching his mind for the right place to start. But it was at that moment that he realised: he had no idea where to start at all. How much should I tell Lidusis, anyway? If he already blames himself for it, telling him that the Ishuella incident happened because someone was targeting him would just make things worse, wouldn’t it?
But he couldn’t just tell Lidusis someone was after him and leave it at that (especially since he didn’t know what that mana lump and Professor Heil wanted with him in the first place); he wanted Lidusis to be able to protect himself, and how could he if he didn’t know what he was protecting himself from?
On top of this, it occurred to him that it might not be the best of ideas to talk about something like this when so many people were around. If someone overhears me, I’ll be in trouble. And it might draw attention to Lidusis again.
Coming up out of thought, it hit him that he’d been standing at Lidusis’s desk the whole time, and Lidusis was still looking up at him, by now looking somewhat concerned. Rood breathed out (the same breath he’d taken to begin talking; it hadn’t been too long, at least).
“I need to tell you something, but... I think it would be better to do it later. And somewhere more private, like,” the storage room won’t do, Dio’s there, “our room.”
Lidusis seemed just a little disappointed, but at the same time, relieved (perhaps because now, he had a time and a place, that he would begin to understand what was happening around here). He nodded. “...Alright.” It was at that point the professor came into the room, so Rood returned to his seat, and continued contemplating what to tell Lidusis. After a bit, his mind began to wander in the direction of the other people he would need to speak with. It was just as well, because neither of them ever got back to their room that day.
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Post by tableswillflip on May 11, 2016 2:02:58 GMT
So I was wondering what happened in chapter 73 after Rood said to Lidusis that he needed to tell him something a couple months ago, and from the eventual conclusion sprouted this idea. Enjoy, I guess?
“Lidusis. I have something to tell you. You’re involved in it, as well as myself.”
By the time Rood was finished speaking, Lidusis’s full attention was on him. Rood had made up his mind; he wasn’t going to keep Lidusis in the dark any longer. It wouldn’t be wise to tell him everything, but Rood’s friend already suspected something was going on. It was simply a matter of partially explaining what that something was.
Rood breathed in, searching his mind for the right place to start. But it was at that moment that he realised: he had no idea where to start at all. How much should I tell Lidusis, anyway? If he already blames himself for it, telling him that the Ishuella incident happened because someone was targeting him would just make things worse, wouldn’t it?
But he couldn’t just tell Lidusis someone was after him and leave it at that (especially since he didn’t know what that mana lump and Professor Heil wanted with him in the first place); he wanted Lidusis to be able to protect himself, and how could he if he didn’t know what he was protecting himself from?
On top of this, it occurred to him that it might not be the best of ideas to talk about something like this when so many people were around. If someone overhears me, I’ll be in trouble. And it might draw attention to Lidusis again.
Coming up out of thought, it hit him that he’d been standing at Lidusis’s desk the whole time, and Lidusis was still looking up at him, by now looking somewhat concerned. Rood breathed out (the same breath he’d taken to begin talking; it hadn’t been too long, at least).
“I need to tell you something, but... I think it would be better to do it later. And somewhere more private, like,” the storage room won’t do, Dio’s there, “our room.”
Lidusis seemed just a little disappointed, but at the same time, relieved (perhaps because now, he had a time and a place, that he would begin to understand what was happening around here). He nodded. “...Alright.” It was at that point the professor came into the room, so Rood returned to his seat, and continued contemplating what to tell Lidusis. After a bit, his mind began to wander in the direction of the other people he would need to speak with. It was just as well, because neither of them ever got back to their room that day.
The characters acted in character, which was nice, but why didn't the get back to their room that day? i don't really get it...xD
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Post by Neco on May 11, 2016 2:26:12 GMT
So I was wondering what happened in chapter 73 after Rood said to Lidusis that he needed to tell him something a couple months ago, and from the eventual conclusion sprouted this idea. Enjoy, I guess?
“Lidusis. I have something to tell you. You’re involved in it, as well as myself.”
By the time Rood was finished speaking, Lidusis’s full attention was on him. Rood had made up his mind; he wasn’t going to keep Lidusis in the dark any longer. It wouldn’t be wise to tell him everything, but Rood’s friend already suspected something was going on. It was simply a matter of partially explaining what that something was.
Rood breathed in, searching his mind for the right place to start. But it was at that moment that he realised: he had no idea where to start at all. How much should I tell Lidusis, anyway? If he already blames himself for it, telling him that the Ishuella incident happened because someone was targeting him would just make things worse, wouldn’t it?
But he couldn’t just tell Lidusis someone was after him and leave it at that (especially since he didn’t know what that mana lump and Professor Heil wanted with him in the first place); he wanted Lidusis to be able to protect himself, and how could he if he didn’t know what he was protecting himself from?
On top of this, it occurred to him that it might not be the best of ideas to talk about something like this when so many people were around. If someone overhears me, I’ll be in trouble. And it might draw attention to Lidusis again.
Coming up out of thought, it hit him that he’d been standing at Lidusis’s desk the whole time, and Lidusis was still looking up at him, by now looking somewhat concerned. Rood breathed out (the same breath he’d taken to begin talking; it hadn’t been too long, at least).
“I need to tell you something, but... I think it would be better to do it later. And somewhere more private, like,” the storage room won’t do, Dio’s there, “our room.”
Lidusis seemed just a little disappointed, but at the same time, relieved (perhaps because now, he had a time and a place, that he would begin to understand what was happening around here). He nodded. “...Alright.” It was at that point the professor came into the room, so Rood returned to his seat, and continued contemplating what to tell Lidusis. After a bit, his mind began to wander in the direction of the other people he would need to speak with. It was just as well, because neither of them ever got back to their room that day.
The characters acted in character, which was nice, but why didn't the get back to their room that day? i don't really get it...xD Because right after this, Master, who was pretending to be Dio, got dragged away by Rood for acting not like Dio at all....then Shic came...and then the barrier went up....yep xD
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